mrmelody7
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life
See lots of gifted young writers
posting on the vibe
let not your thirst for writing
b denied
do it do it till you satisfied
Express yourself in such a way
that causes a reader to say
yeah Ive felt that way
before too
but could never say or explain
it the way you do
Yes its nice to get comments
and views
but you are writing cause
you want too
its what your muse
wants to reveal to you
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COMMENTS
DOLISHA DEVONNE says: THIS IS VERY INSPIRING! ANYONE WHO READS THIS, I HOPE THEY ARE ENCOURAGED TO WRITE AND EXPRESS THEMSELVES MORE |
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mrmelody7 says: Appreciate that very much since bout third grade teachers encouraged me English teachers in high school mine is a gift writing is down the list of things I like to do am aperson who wanted to do a lot of things in life mostly to say I did that was into sports music got poems in about six different books got my sports trophies couple records I wrote the words to one last thing if you have never read IF by Rudyard Kipling its about becoming a man but it applys to girls too a Jewish teacher of mine teachin in our rough neighborhood they treated her bad she was aprisoner in the German death camps her number is branded on her arm its like a blue vein in color she turned me on2 the poem in sixth grade it made me who I am |
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mlowe5 says: Wow! Praises to you mrmelody7. As an Educator with more than 40 years of full time classroom expreriences and still giving during my retirement years, I never heard a greater powerful and inspiring teaching feedback to the young pregnant poetic minds of today. I hope and pray that their listening eyes will hear this message. Thank you much for this share. Peace and Love, Brother mlowepoems by this commentor |
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mrmelody7 says: I am the one saying wow thank you much helping the younger generation have it better then our generation like was my destiny it was somethin I have always worked at am not a person who wants a lot out of life and those around me have nothin I highly thank you Money has never been high on my list thank you once again |
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The Immortal Wize says: shut up and write that's what I always say, this says it better |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you you make a fine Professor your name says it all |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY mrmelody7
As The Year Comes To EndAs another year approaches another one bites the dust preppin meself for this new cycle a sho nuff must Takin care business makin sure all decisions come true somethin I absolutely just love to do Happy holidays everyone leavin the year with Sly Stone sayin it best for me Thank U 4 let me B micelf Sly and family Stone Youtube has it  |
Everyday PeopleAm no joke eye bring Smoke One of them everyday people folk Dont mind me at 76 trombones still take a toke Everyday People Sly my favorite Poet Youtube got it Everyday People Sly and the Family Stone |
Mark Of The BeastMark of the beast settlin in Bit coin digital dollar Great song great Singer never got his due Willie Hutch from the LP Mark Of the beast Mark of the beast Youtube got it |
Joy To The WorldSomethin real and serene about these last three months of the year People Spirits seem to B much more joyous they smile and speak more when you pass them on the street or in the store there is a quiet happiness in their voices The weather is cool and calm outside warm snuggly comfortable inside Time to wrap up the year get things right for the new coming year The holidays and feasts a comin til the end of the year Joy to the world every where
Somewhere among my many 45s lies this record it was number one on billboard for many weeks in the mid 70s Still love it youtube has it Joy to the world by Three Dog Night |
Cozy SpotRight now its the Cozy Spot Sittin in my yard countryside in my truck while there is rain lovingly comin down absoloutely love the sound Its my Cozy Spot sittin out here enjoy the rain windows down diggin the breeze thats comin along Just love seein feelin the Creators majestic power majestic creativity the awesome power of the Livin God Lee Oskar play harmonica in my favorite group War he did this solo Lp I love this particular song especially the last minute the song is called before the rain I catch my sounds on youtube |
The God FatherJB James Brown the God Father there is a reason this brother who always puts it on the good foot who hits us with messages in hit after hit over years and decades plus times ahead is called the God Father listen as he throws down about this new president from his other world Song is Funky President youtube got it gone on rap God Father |
Family Affair Veterans DayNever did it before just want to give a shout out to the Vets from our household I shall start with my Dad he was a Cpl in the Marine Corp he was in Hawaii waiting to b shipped to Japan when they drop the A bomb did not go My deceased 2nd oldest brother was a Sgt in Marine Corps he was shipped headed to Vietnam when they got to Guam they needed a Sgt to b over firearms orders changed to stay there My sister this in 65 she was a Lcpl in the Marine Corps she was stationed Camp Lejune and Paris Island My deceased oldest brother he Was a Spec 4 in the Army he was stationed in Alaska I was a Spec 5 in the Army did a tour of Vietnam my younger recenctly deceased brother he was in the Army he was stationed in Germany My next to the youngest brother was in the Air Force he was in the Tops Of Bluues its a band in the Air Force that traveled to USO shows and bases playing different brand... |
Black Folks Endangered SpeciesNow that the Toxic Republicans again in control Black Folks rally around our new black Folks Anthem its on youtube its called Bop gun Endangered Species by Parliament 4 toxic years on the menu |
Right OnIf U didnt take the time to go vote I dont wanna hear nothin U gotta say bout the economy about the racist hate about the wars about the high gas prices U got no complaints at all if you sit or sat back and say said it dont matter who win everything still b the same I dont wanna hear it no matter how tough things get mean while when the voting is over I go right back to livin the life Marvin Gaye sing about the song called Right On from the classic LP Whats Going On I am one of those who simply like to socialize those of us who enjoy ourselves Peace and You tube it |
Veterans DayVeterans Day soon will b here For my part Army Man raised the right hand repeat after me This I Will Defend For me it was an honor to say this Flag is our Flag This is our trophy u got to go thru somethin to talk about or attempt to take our Flag nuff said A solid salute ot all the Brothers and Sisters of all Branches and a special shout out to my Brothers and Sisters of the Vietnam War we shall never forget our treatment upon returning to the US of A Took a couple of generations of young Teachers who taught the kids the true meaning of Veterans Day for us to regain faith in America but my generation U shall never b forgiven We didnt ask to go U sent us so we went Kids fresh out of high school sent to fight someone in thei... |
