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2b2b2
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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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Punchline

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just different

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Souls grow as the drum rolls

 

Born old, young at heart to start

 

Double crossed lines to track changes

 

Memoirs of memories, primordial visions

 

Pre-destined, premiering eyewitness testimony

 

Resounding clap back, existentially fact checked

 

Which way is up, when I was richer prior, funnily

 

Going around, couldn't see what was coming

 

Corner hugging, hoping for a fair-weathered straight-away

 

Naked and blind, walking behind shadow reflected sunshine

 

Dirt on hands, brush dust off, comb my heirs, understood

 

Would I change a thing, I will, if I should....(???)

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Contest Winner  

mlowe5 says:

Pow! Well penned, Sir. Thanks for sharing such powerful punching lines and the deep alligorical messages they convey. Peace and Love, mlowe
 

mrmelody7 says:

Very enjoyable presentation flowed and messaged nicely

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LP45 says:

Nice work 2B. Very nice.

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