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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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asked to recite one night stood up

with a tremble in my voice I was

a little nervous of course my throat

scratchy and hoarse facing the audience

all eyes center stage opening the book

clearing my parched dry throat I turned to

the page where I wrote Manic Flow

after taking a few sips from a water glass

of spritzer I took a deep breath letting out

a roar like a wounded lion in pain

word for word verbatim vibrating

in epic proportion gripping the sides

of the podium feeling the momentum

the crowd went silent I no longer cared

who was listening to my facet leaking

while rusty pipes were knocking

no longer shameful of the roaches

crawling out of the cupboard falling

into the glass of milk I poured and left

on the table next to the catchup sandwich

the cat was out the bag the dog was

outback tied to a tree the mouse was

caught on a trap the whole house heard

the snap in to deep no turning back

feeling the words coming out of the trap

mouth cut so deep you could reach in

take an organ out I felt heavily sedated

in a trance the curtains drew to a close

audiance in stitches from deep incisions

to their feet they rose it felt as if I was

the only one who wasn't wearing clothes

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mlowe5 says:

Such is the nature of the Word. Word up! Thanks for the share; wish I had been there! Peace and Love, mlowe

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