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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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if I tap out I can't breathe
if I fight to live I can't leave
if I bump into things I can't see
if I stay in bed I can't walk
if I can't walk I can't move
I ain't got nothing to prove
still I got a lot of stuff to do
on my mind I need to prime
can't draw from an empty well
just in case I got a pail to bail
just got released from a whale
been so deep in the belly
of the beast not comforting
sep't the peace and time away
insane of me to say I wanted
to stay a little while longer
felt I was getting stronger
in the grumbling stomach
I hungered but not for food
in dark places hides the truth
for those who are too scared
to go to find what's been sown
like a seed in soil takes its time
to toil matters how we till

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Plowed thoughts are the tilling that brings forth the eventual fruit from the belly of laboring contemplatation. Thanks for the share. Nice write. Peace and Love, M'Lowe.
 

tywordsword says:

Nice

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