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Freeze...

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Freeze

Shrieking winds, shred… the very air…

Icy blasts… render creatures motionless

Shivering… seeking cover  

In hidden shelters… safe …if not warm…

Remembering …spring, summer, fall

Will come again…

Thoughts of far away …warm and calm…

Lost in the desolate cold grip

Of winters deadly breath

Frigid air… leaving its frosted signature

Upon the grass, the surface of the waters…

Upon the fallen leaves…

Nothing escapes… its reach…

Extending further in …within our bones

Its snowflakes attacking …relentlessly…

Like teeth …in the wind…

Falling endlessly… end over end…

Frozen fingers reaching around the throat

Stealing our breath… taking us to the very edge…

Praying we come no further …within its realm…

To receive …its frosty blessing…

The touch …of death…

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Sir Charles beautiful scenery of the Winter element so vivid took me back to them growin up winter time in that artic Ct winters-to receive its frosty blessings
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The Immortal Wize says:

Very Nice!
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Imagination_733 says:

Beautiful write. I felt it as I read it.

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mlowe5 says:

Damn, Bro! You almost froze me to death. Such beautiful sad imergy! Love this chilling read. So surreal. Made me shiver. You most definitely captured the Freeze. Got go get me a cup of "African Tea"! Peace and Love, M'Lowe.
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Charles2 says:

Brothers and sister... at least we have each other to fight the frost and chill... we are not alone in our observance of the tides of life... there are visions which serve to prepare us...

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mlowe5 says:

Amen! So mote it be! Peace and Love, mlowe5

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