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long distance

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Daylight not saving...waiting,

my sun travels the sky behind,

for she doesn't see me- see me!

Abandonment is all she provides.

 

I grieved, unattended to,

blazoned for her warmth to show,

till all drifted upon me were cold

shoulders,

where I had become one with the snow.

 

My life dwindled and slowed,

watered drops frozen to molds.

A stranger alerted, sheltered my globe,

wanted not to know, but to elope.

 

She'd only row, just attentive at most,

like a partner eager to yearn,

she paddled my boat,

and with a wise two words I spoke...

"You discern"!

 

-Jg

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msprescious22 says:

well spoken

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