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The precious petal of all Roses

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Petal Candy coated, got me stuck in time, my time was frozen 

 Had to rewind my mind to each memory that we shared,

I had to climb the thorn I was holding

Carefully tiptoeing on her soul, my mind was sharp and determined, had to be careful not to mow your sacred poses

All of these lessons that I was verbally crowing,

I knew that it was the sunlight of my mind that had you glowing 

Brought water with me to the party, that had my precious pedal growing

complimented her every millisecond, had my precious pedal boasting

Sincere and focused, you have that affect on me, high off your magic potion

I'm now a junkie for your love, addiction stage your drugs are super potent

I'm numb to every other petal around me,

I'm not impressed, wish that they would all fall from around me

They tryna give me a crown, but because of you I'm hiding and don't wanna be found

Only you can make love to my mind and turn my frowns upside down

Wiping my tears from the inside out, you gave me the courage to make it to the top

Who would have ever thought that poetry would take it this far?!

You taught me what love was, you were the teacher of my heart 

Andddddddddd if I can't no longer have your love I will quietly take your thorn and place it in my heart

Ending it all at once, just to be buried in your soil

Anddddddd it's not because of the friendly reject,

it's because I've always described love as the "Ultimate respect"

So you die just so that you can grow with best.

Precious petal, my precious petal, fall into my palms, so that I can ink a Rose letter.

Qadar Dwon'

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The Immortal Wize says:

Sometimes reading a Poem causes me to smile, this is one of those Poems.🔥

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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Wize Dom! You will forever be one of my favorites! You've inspired ,encouraged, and motivated me from my first day on her.. And for that I'm forever thankful for you.. You're one on the greatest to ever ink! The Hall of Ink awaits you!
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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! Soft rose pedals and inked throned words. Enjoyed this "...Rose letter..." You are indeed, a poetic gardner---a Rose King! Peace and Love, mlowe5
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@MMowe5... My beloved brother, poetic mentor and poetic elder.. Your words and feedback means everything to me.. You are an absolute Gem and great contemporary of mine, I'm blessed to share this platform with a great like you.. Peace, love, and light..
 

nicole_thepoet says:

perfect perfection of what true love ought to be. this makes me wanna know you more. not out of a relationship but to know more of your mind because i embrace your gift. this is a lovely pen write, not too many men are affectionate, passionate and expressionate as you are in this poem. loyalty at it's finest. Divine

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