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Saturn's Balm (psalm)

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Rings’  alarm,  world’s  crash to  a  halt

Still, out  in  space, the universe moves invariably

Looks present  beyond,  what  “I”  can  expect  to  see,  to change me

We  search  the cosmos  for a new hope  of a  place to rest our wounds

Searching  far  and  wide,  we  settle  upon a  corona  crown of red thorns

 

Pain  is  2b  felt  for more  than  a  cycle,  for  the cycle  is the only pathway

Along  the  way are  the  counter  intuitive,  hoping  to  maintain  their  pace

Only 2b  destroyed  by  the  crush  of  time  and  space  marking the change to heart

The  touch  of  insight,  eliminates  all  fantastical  theories  of  norm

Gassing  swirls  of  expectation  evaporate  just  as quickly as  formed

So  above  tells  us  what  lies  low,  so  we  are  forced  to  see and feel

Recourse  is  about  to  be  the  only  direction  to  travel  to  eclipse  the  pain….

Pangs  of  a  pathway commonly  travelled, no  longer able  to  move  straightaway

 

So  if  one  has  ever  spied  Saturn  from  a  telescopic  view,  the  opposites  are  true

Through  one  eye  at  a  time,  we  see  out  in  space  a  celestial  body  upside  down

Separated  and  revolving  rings  of  salvation,  that can  be  spied  but not invoked before a turn

To  jump  a  ring  is  to  perish  in  the  crush  of  the weight  of  universe  moving  along a divine line

 

When  Saturn  turns  to  visit  all that  you  know  and  love  and  feel  concern,  take  heed

The  rings  revolve  not  as  we  have  come  to  expect,  but  in  its  direct  polar  opposites

Even  at  a spell of  time,  the  great  party  crasher  has  a  turn,  and  its  during  this time  reconciled

Spiritual  ledgers  are  examined  and  wounds  receive  a  painful  poultice  that  hurts  like  a hell

The  healing,  begins when  we  accept  our  turn  in  the  unfamiliar  before  being made whole again 

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LP45 says:

Excellent write my friend! Perspectively penned and sensible approach to our ongoing situation. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Peace.
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mlowe5 says:

What a beautiful cosmic awakening! Indeed, instead of seeking the "reason or rhyme" perspective, we need tlelscopicly focus on the rings of reality circling our being in and of the wholeness of this vast universe of which we are an Earthly particle part of. Indeed, 2b2b2, is in being aware that "...the healing, begins when we accept our turn in the unfamiliar before being made whole again." Thank you Sir for this powerful read that took me around it twice! Peace and Love, mlowe5
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Kingqadardwon' says:

I hear you loud and Clear 2B! Masterpiece.... The frequencies of Saturn, the planet amuses everyone, back like we never left..

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