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Ocean Water

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All of me beamed,

til she left in that light

shadowing my body into dark depths

staining me like the dusking marine.


Drowning within,

my lungs over top,

not but two anchors,

submerging me without her.


My air slumped

while she vanished at the surface,

retiring my purpose,

without a life guard.


She told me life was hard,

but yet I swam with the sharks

only feeling the sharp barbs

once she was away from me.

 

-Jg

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