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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Burning Soul

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I been on a journey

I ran from a bush

it was burning

I fell in some holes

I was learning

I went from waking up

to breakfast on the table

to trying to eat

and wasn't able

in my feebleness

I shouted out

"GOD YOU AIN'T NOTHIN"

it thundered God chuckled

faded me a few knuckles

then picked me up and

made me something or

should I say God made

something out of me

somebody needs to hear this

I wont hesitate to say

there is no time to waste

andele haste get up move

exercise get in shape

don't be slothful

you too powerful

 past was an hour ago

it's light in the unusual

living down below

black moon skies

searching for the

  emergence from

the depth of the sea

we've been told repeatedly

      "it's fire in the hole"

 

and gold in them there hills

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mlowe5 says:

Oh Yeah! Nice pen. Enjoyed the read and got the message. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.
 

RobinJPFTS says:

Nice Ink!

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nicole_thepoet says:

this tantalized my mind abit.. good write!

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