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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I'm good with words I'm good
 with manipulation but I could
never persuade you to love me
 as much as I loved you it was
too hard for me to do I tried everything
 wishing I could sing and you
like the song constantly asking
 myself what did I do wrong
"what did I do wrong"?
 you said a lot of things but
never did you answer the
 question it lead me to believe
it was nothing I knew it was nothing
 but your actions left me needing
something you couldn't give
 I fell out on the floor I didn't
want to live "I didn't want to live"
 I couldn't die because my
heart didn't' feel the same
 though it complained about
the pain I had to muddle through
 I could not bring myself to
understand you, you were
 supposed to love me that
was your job to do I was your
 only child I belonged to you
when you died I couldn't
 come through because
while everybody was at the
 podium lying I was holding
on to the truth is I wish I
 didn't waste all these years
holding on to you I was 2 or 3
 when you left me on the front
porch crying out to you
 you ran like you were late
for work you had one job to do
 I wish you were here
not because I miss you
I want to punch you in
the face I swear I do

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mlowe5 says:

Wow, such is the pain in the other side of fridge of the heart; the oven side will melt it away. To forgive does not mean to forget. The messenging lesson in memory can often be painful to descern. Keep punching away at "hate" and you will soon 'Knock It Out"! Meanwhile, continue doing the daily "push-ups" of Peace and Love. mlowe5
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2b2b2 says:

More heat....penning emotions....Bravo!!

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jwins says:

I sooo felt this! with watery eyes...

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