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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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Lovelorn

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long distance

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Naked yet 2b still  left warm,

Requiem to the forlorn…..

Felled by caring for  too long

Goodbyes’ precipice  promising

Tomorrows’ love new and improved

 

Feelings distill in a heavenly  reminisce

Closed periods,  forever regretfully missed

Nearing anew in views at storms’ behest

Confessions that profess in feelings detest

 

Flirtatious smiles, beguiling  lies  in  trust

Just wanting….Just  wanting……the  us,  never  realized

Longing to  long, Just  a  little  while  on….why?

 

 My Hearts’ haste, left to waste

Or might it  be  a run  at  love  to scared to face

Hung up  on  misdirected  disgrace, reasoned to taste

Head over  heels  for  the  loss of her kiss and accents

Wishes applied  to  lips  at  heart  in  silence……

 

Finding love  hints  that  beckon  to  my  heart

Afraid to  leave  this  place,  that  has  become  the norm

I search  thru  pages and pages  of  hearts  lost and  found, hoping

Haunting spaces for a time  to find  one to  answer a  love’s  loneliest  help  wanted…..

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The Immortal Wize says:

It's not over love is sure to find you I can only imagine.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Astute one 2bsure always love how you break things down so nicely touching on many great points how you say Love first and love lasts
 

mrmelody7 says:

Lookin quite dapper calm and relaxed b well and safe as well your Governorwill be President if he ever decides to run think hes doing a good job
 

LP45 says:

Great write 2b. Love’s transitions aren’t always easy, but they do lead us to better things in the long run. As much as the sun sets, it will rise again. Peace and blessings my friend! Thank you for sharing this.
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mlowe5 says:

Powerful! Being in love is one thing; giving and wanting love is another. Lovelorness teaches the difference. In the yellowing of time we come to realize that giving love is much more important. As a giver of love, we will have crosses to bear until the resurrection of eternal love is given back. Somewhere in the old axiom, "...its better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all...", there must be a deep rooted allegorical message. Peace and Love, my Brother. mlowe5
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2b2b2 says:

True that Wize....true that...thanks (winks)
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2b2b2 says:

mrmelody thanks for your support....as far as my home government I will reserve judgment as mom always says...new brooms sweep good....(smile)

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2b2b2 says:

No doubt LP45....nothing stays the same, and so we grow through the pain...thank you....ONE
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2b2b2 says:

Brother mlowe5....timely wisdom is greatly appreciated....you are absolutely right...thank you sincerely for the reminder....ONE
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Kingqadardwon' says:

Love is on two fronts! The front end and the back end, the best to be in is the middle of them both... Outstanding capture King!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Ha Ha Mom knows best

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2b2b2 says:

Definitely Astute Kingqadardwon'....Balance is learning to ride the wave....ONE

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Charles2 says:

A wealth of depth and emotion expressed. Very well arranged...

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