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JustGreylon

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Candle light,

moon beams

peaked through

the window shutter.


She laid naked,

zebra laced

like a safari

uncovered.


Her body buttered,

lustered the night

while she slept quietly

through the down pour.


He watched drawn,

reefer smells dwindled

under her loud fragrance

til he could bare no more.

 

-Jg

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mlowe5 says:

Insightful awareness filled with beautiful imaging allegorical messaging. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

J.J.Oxtail says:

Reminds me of intimate nights where I have fallen asleep before my partner. Is this what it's like? Is the question that's running through my head. This was an interesting read.
 

bragee says:

great imagery associated with the after moments of an intimate night! Good stuff poet
 

JustGreylon says:

@ J.J exactly like that.

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JustGreylon says:

Thanks fellas for the input! Input keeps me motivated to give my readers more.

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