ScorionQueen
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Sassy says: Hi there, I like this poem. It would be good if the layout was broken up a bit more into paragraphs. i like the line ''drifts swiftly now that I cannot stand to imagine'' I can understand this feeling. Feeling adrift from the happiness promised. Good piece |
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love_supreme says: Il like the flow of this poem. Excellent write |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY ScorionQueen
FreeAsz I watch the Moon I wonder What Wat you Are doing I shudnt But I do U ment so much to me to have did me the way that u do I feel like I'm not Enough For u But then asz I sit n realize u waz neva for my Soul u Had so Many Changes to Prove ur Love But u Disappeared outta the blue Asz I Consult wit myself Did i do the rite thing i needed to do could u handle if another man step In n proved to be true would u fight for my love Or would u surrender me too You could of told me wat was on ur mind instead of hindering the truth I'm not Hard to please u should know that by now too so I must part For u will neva be true I want my son to myself with no part of you u waz all I ever wanted and dreamed of too how dare u to take an half innocent soul n Tanted into ur pool if u Never realli wanted me y couldn't you say the truth? These words I speak are deep and true I neva thght outta the 3yrz 2 months 25days that it would eva come to this too just wanted to make u betta man not control wat ... |
BrokenTo have intimacy with your physical attraction but when where there be love in that action it seems asz if my heart was pulled out of chest like a magician would do a rabbit Maybe its karma Or maybe it waz ment to happen but now I feel lost standing in the rain hoping for a chance for someone to grab me all emotions must happen who am I Deny The reality of things that happen I feel cold Like in living in Alaska I never wanted this to happen things go through my head nobody could ever imagine I love so deep n freely but it seems something alwayz bad happens I must leave your lyfe for it has no purpose I waz supposed to be everything u ever could imagine now it drifts swiftly now that I cant stand to imagine it hurts no lie but something that's me cringe when I feel you next to her our energy is to strong for one another so itz best part and find another you will alwayz have my heart but it seems I will never have yours ðŸ¤ðŸ˜” |