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J.King337
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got a new poem ready for this Sunday!! It's entitled "The Unspoken Lesson".

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Y'all Not Feeling Me

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Y'all not feeling me,

 

I spit lyrical bars only to be overlooked,

 

Taking what I can scrape up I demand more.

 

A rhyme scheme I tend to steer from,

 

Allowing my thoughts to paint a picture for all to see.

 

Y'all not feeling me,

 

I write of me by me,

 

A story of my life, biography.

 

Of my pain I seek no sympathy,

 

I take on anybody who wrongs me, animosty.

 

No pity from anyone I expect nothing,

 

What I lost is my fault no one else I blame;

 

but what is gain I praise His glorious name.

 

Y'all not feeling me,

 

So much love I wasted upon unworthy women,

 

I admit that I did things to push them away;

 

But during my times of weakness their devious ways

 

Are realized too late.

 

Too nice I am for it is my nature,

 

But then again the coldness within my heart

 

I can feel it rise once again.

 

Y'all not feeling me,

 

It's fine trust me.

 

In silence I am observing,

 

In sorrow I grow stronger,

 

And through strength I am transformed.

 

Y'all don't have to feel me,

 

I'm good.

 

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love_supreme says:

You can only yell it how you see it.
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DeleDivine says:

You have your own style. It's very nice. Everyone should be different. You continue doing you. I like it.:) Poetry has many styles. I Love and respect poetry all around. I've been writing since I was 13. My life is a movie and I see your is as well. I FEEL you.:))

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J.king337 says:

I feel you. I honestly dont know how long I been writing because I never took it this serios until recently. I just love it and I want the world to know who I am so im going to yell on the top of my lungs to get my point across lol. Thank yall again

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takiyahalee says:

Well I know I am listening, yell, drop bombs of lyrics, crop dust your words if you need to! I am just glad to be one of many you share your gift with.

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