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Untimely Demise

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I feel like it's a dream,

The foreground is so serene.

Then the terrible trembling

The shaking so frightening.

You called to me, i would not hear you,

I feel i almost wished this on you too.

The sick feeling from hearing the truth,

Trapped in my solitary booth.

I lost you so long ago, you haven't been mine,

But it's different to hear your life is on the line.

Everything now seems so petty,

All the reasons i hated you, what a pitty.

Nothing you did could make you deserve it,

With my head in my palms, I solemnly sit.

Hoping it won't be so soon for your last breath,

For what a shame it would be, you're untimely death.

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love_supreme says:

;I like how this poem flowed and the story was very powerful.

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DeleDivine says:

Strong story.. So real.. I like.:)

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amin901 says:

good work

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