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Somewhere, when existence ...flipped...

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Somewhere, when …it all began…

From our distorted point of view…

(knee to the neck ...vision)

Prisoners of a life sentence 

Crimes ...against ...us... 

Justice ...without truth... 

Is this... of the god

(to whom you offer us ...in sacrifice) 

Jesus... hair like wool/skin of bronze

Hues... not to be confused... 

Message of love... abused... 

Know how it feels... to suffer... 

Continuously... feeding ungrateful hearts... 

Giving love... praying for peace... 

To ease the heartache ...of so many broken vows...  

We must now... shatter the illusions we hold dear

To realize our truth in this matter... we, who... 

Serve on the flagship ...of oppulent misery... 

By those who choose... greed, above their need... 

We must conclude... with heavy heart... 

We... 

Are... 

Still, prisoners... 

Underserved, receiving undeserved punishment... 

For crime... committed... 

Against us...  

Under God...

Under the gun, 

under the knee ...on our neck... 

...being used... 

Looking inside out …for all we know…

Our version …of anything goes…

The universe… spiraled, its infinitive galaxies

Particles crossed dimensions

In and out …of existence, living as pure energy…

Divine winds …became temporal…

Galactic equilibrium, began to shift…

Coded particles, coalesced

In …orchestral melodies…

  Creating movements …on their own free will…

…and spun within their axis…

Just for the thrill…

On a spiritual plane…

Big enough for …all of us

To live…

Before God…

Made diverse social structures

That we might find the right system

To further our collective development

And freely choose …our angle of trajectory

To advance and consolidate our gains

In accordance with a design

Worthy …and true

 With humility …in the will… 

For all mankind

The chosen …are sent to enhance and pursue…

The cohesion, with justice

…and stability for all…

Rather, than …the wretched …few…

To live …or die, for…stolen wealth

No longer …in our purview…

 

 

C2  

 

 

             

 

 

Not sure

How this whole thing…

Went from …blessed life, in the garden…

To sup and dine …with the divine…

 

The fountain of youth

…went dry…

And the blessed state of being

Which had existed

Between our spheres of influence

Left us… as adversaries

All civility …became lost in our missteps

As our willingness to understand …slipped…

Mistakes, became …our new routine…   

Lost confidence …in our ability to learn…

Lost sight …of our dream…

Began to continuously get burned…

Lost our grip…

We lost hope

Went awry

Continued, endlessly …to fall…

Damn, near…

Lost it, all… 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Powerful cosmic truths with methphoric blinking and shooting stars of enlightenment. Yes, we "...damn near lost it all.." Pray...we take what's left and create a new liberated world for "mattering" life! Thanks for the share, C2. Peace and Love, M. Lowe.
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Charles2 says:

Powerful returns from your reading of view.. from the echoes of my mind songs... thank you...

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