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STRICTLY BUSINESS (POEM OF A MISUNDERSTOOD MAN I FELL IN LOVE WITH)

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Suit and tie, he's all about his money. He don't do partners by he's got the biggest heart it's almost crazy that I'm just getting started. Strictly business with a business face to match, if you ain't buying his time he's a hard one to catch, it's gonna be him that you can't put past. He's fast on his toes but he triples the speed when the money is the bait and to wait, that's not in the vocabulary of this extraordinary, educated and sophisticated business man, payin attention man, a today man not no past man. Don't go getting mad, jus calm down and relax man. Strictly business so don't go tryna hold his hand typa man. Anything that can be done will be done by him kinda man. He's always got a plan. With no failure in his bones, he's more prone to a two handed job. He can't stand when he don't do damage and first impressions, he can manage. Strictly business, I wouldn't waste his time, to conversate with him you must obtain his same mind so first things first. You shouldnt put anything past this once in a lifetime, flip this...use his sense to make his moves and attempt what he attempts. When you say that he cant he's quick to show you that he can typa man. Sandman, selling dreams to these hoes. Now to some he's jus one man but please let me elaborate for you to better understand. To be seen in a world of a million men he's got to be on the right path to destruction since he can rule this land type of man, not no helpless man more like heaven sent. So this is what heaven meant by "he's got the whole world in his hands" Yeah he's strictly business but when he lays next to me with God as my witness. I get to witness the side of him no one else could see. He's soft to the touch, he don't ever let me down but if he must I know his intentions ain't to be too rough. He jus calls it tough love. He's just a business man, tryna push forward and make due with what he can man so don't take it so personal cause it's jus business, but I gotta give him all the praise for having my back and putting me up on game. Kinda got me thinking bout tattin his name. Plus, I already know he done been through the most wit friends and does, but for me this shows me not to be so quick to judge everything by what I see since those looks can very well be deceiving. Because this strictly business man is really jus misunderstood, most hurt, insecure, holding onto his last, hating his past, don't assume just ask, don't fake no funk or wear no mask, never fictional, always facts, body worn down, heart hurting bad, most of all my first and my last. -angie the poet-

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Charles2 says:

Most ...excellent...
 

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Thank you

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