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Fluidic...

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life

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In mists …which hang low…

Drawn …through river valleys…  

As if… having a consciousness…

Making dew kissed grasses

Blush …at first light…

Sparkling brightly

In sparkling chains…

Of golden orbs

Draped perfectly,    

Resting …

…on spider webs

Mirrors,

In sunlight

Speaking  

 From the Creator

To us…

Are …we…

Listening…

 

 

In rain …pouring…  

 

From discrete holes

In the heavens

 

As …dew… tossed about  

Turned, inside out…

Falling upwards

Towards …the heavens…

Until…

Full …of energy…

Falling…

 

And snowflakes…

Bringing a spreading

The touch of death…

To helpless creatures  

Caught up …in the awe…

While what first

Appears …to be beautiful  

Removing heat

Driven by winds …falling through space

Cast down, from majestic heights…

 …

Upon the earth below

And…

In oceans

Vast …and deep…

In waves …in particles…

Compounded by …the massive scale…

A world, both… of majestic wonder…

And terrific …savagery…

Who knows better,

than…

 

God…

 

 

 

How water touches

Every corner of this earth…

 

 And …within, us…

The vessel of this body

The envelope, we’re in…

 

Born, in water…

Created …half fish…

 

Without which…

 

We…

 

Cannot exist

 

Fluidic…

 

 

 

C2  

 

 

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Flowing tears of joy of the many beautiful lives of water, us and the Creator. Thanks for sharing this shared fascination...shared appreciation of the Father's precious gift. Peace and Love.
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Charles2 says:

I will drink with you ...to that

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Coalhouse says:

You sir are the Man!
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Charles2 says:

Thank you, Coalhouse... just trying to spin a yard, that's worth a darn.

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