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Praying for You (parody)

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PRAYING FOR YOU (parody)

Lord, there used to be this friend of mine

used to walk the streets hardly had a dime,

'till his buddies kind of got a hold of him

he began swearing, selling weed, this life

you gave him began looking pretty slim.

He tried his very best to back out of it all

that's when they slipped a gun in his hand,

Lord he said it was the first and the last time

he'd empty a clip of lead into another man.

I feel like he feel, that he's slowly dying

tried to get him to get a job, and earn this life

but it seems to me at least he aint really trying!

He got into a class at a school jus' up the street

only for the loan, now he's back with his ole'

gang Lord, claims he can't even sleep.

My prayers aren't being answered my Lord

my knees have burn marks, I'm so tired & sore.

It's killing me I know by now it's killing you

my friend's dodging cars, stray dogs, even the

police, what else in the world do I need to do?

He aint socializing, but steadily antagonizing

and since he don't carry your master plan I

guess that I completely understand!

His pants nowadays are even sagging, he used

to have 'em up like Steve Urkel, I keep seeing

him drifting close to the edge Lord, I believe he's lost in his own circle.

I'm praying for him, but that him is really me

dangling from the edge, struggling to be fed,

telling folks that I'm starving, they say “There's

physical food, and spiritual food, what are you

carving?”.

(message in a bottle) -BlakMista-  7/15/2020

To be Continued........

                                                    

    

 

 

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Wise_Notion says:

Dope message...thanks for sharing
 

blakmista says:

Wise_Notion I do thank you for your input.

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