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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Barren Space

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it's not enough tears to fill

this ocean of emptiness

it's too many leaky cracks in it

its dangerous to dive into it

its wide enough to get lost inside

its deep enough to not come up

its a open wound its a open grave

it a part of earth it suddenly caved

its an open mouth it won't shut up

its a unclogged pore in earths core

its a site of total remote desolation

its proof something existed before

it denotes the destruction of war

its rootless fruitless sunken shore

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Chasingmysoul says:

Enjoyed!!♥

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, in a space there has always been something or something waiting for; even if only unseened barren awareness.
 

inkthatspeaks says:

This was dope!
 

LP45 says:

I liked this. Dig your wordplay in this one.

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