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lightness in the dark
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He sat near the window, the curtains blowing in the breeze, The sound of soft music played, as his fingers pressed each piano key. I watched him from a distance, no words...nothing just listened. He moved his fingers methodically, causing his rhythmic sound to embrace my whole body. Wanting him to speak, no words came out, the music he played drowned everything else out. I sat near him calmly as he continued to play...I closed my eyes, allowing my mind to wander, my thoughts led astray. Listing to him play I wanted to listen longer, the enchantment of his music got stronger and stronger the fear this would end, I wanted it to last longer. Beautiful, majestic, and pure, the mere sight of this man made me feel secure. Suddenly I get a jolt though out my body, reminding me to wake up now, because it's morning.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Beautiful

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tretre says:

Thank you, Wize for the feedback. It's been awhile since I've been here, but I'm back🤗
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2b2b2 says:

Tight Work....well crafted....good to read you tretre...welcome back....ONE
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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! and indeed, in tune. Enjoyed this morning read. i even heard the playing. Thanks for the share. Welcome back. It's morning! Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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