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Subway Riding Trains of Thought

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Movements  are  expressed  "vida  loca"

Screeching  stops, punctuating (be) causes

Break-dancing performances,  in  art on  display

All is  fair in  hopping  on or  sliding  thru to  turn styles

Begging  for  change  or  just  plain gaming  a ticket to ride

Dark flashes of tunnel-vision from day dreaming upon imagined billboards

Sudden  stops,  right  before  pulling  emergency  chords dramatically

The  jolt  is  the  only  punchline  for  those  riding to  the end of line in mind

watch  for closing  doors,  and  hold  onto  them  straps hanging off  safety bars

From underground  to  elevated, transitioning from rocking  mettle  by  balancing motions

Listen  up  with  eyes  to mind because  muffled  messages aren’t quite  clear  during rush hours

Poetic  subway  savvy    deciphering  some  abstract locale  is  to be  sure where you going

Mental transportation  is  mapping  out  your  journey, rather than  asking  for  directions

2b,  I  must  admit  to  riding  between  to and  fro’  as  the  journey  is what I’m out to expose!

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mlowe5 says:

Neat! Thus the "...mapping out [the] journey, rather than asking for directions..." Continue to ask for divine wisdom and guidance in the exposed destination. Great write. Thanks for the "underground" sharing of what lies "above"; praying we arrive free from harm and indeed, free from causing harm to ourselves in the sojourn. I am proud to 2b travelling with U. Peace and Love, Brother, M'Lowe.

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LP45 says:

Wow. What awesome imagery. Having been on only 2 subways in my entire lifetime this one here makes me want to start a bucket list. But to travel on this one, I will definitely need a guide who knows where to go. Thanks for the visual ride 2b. Love your work!
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The Immortal Wize says:

Sounds like a New York State of mind.
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks mlowe5.....victory follows and envelopes those who dare to believe in its inevitability....thank you sir....ONE
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2b2b2 says:

LP45 I hope one day you will be able to enjoy a full sensory journey on the "famed" NYC subway...it is certainly an acquired taste by most, but a necessity for travellers (winks)

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2b2b2 says:

Yes Indeed Poet Wize....it is an ever present motion that my home town gives off....thanks for checking me and commenting....ONE
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2b2b2 says:

love_suipreme I am honored by your comments and support....Namaste

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mrmelody7 says:

El terrific write enjoy this ride closes I come is the silver bullet trains love the Bus station there to New York always got interesting characters the Bronx skyscraper apartment housing should b the 8th wonder of the world so tall for blocks only see it from the bus never been down in there know thats something else really enjoyed this ride
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mlowe5 says:

Indeed. Peace and Love. mlowe5

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