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WarriorCarryingWater
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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Alone

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I woke up from a long coma

In my bed and smelled a strange aroma

Years had past and everyone was gone

Extremely thirsty my hair was gray, matted and long

I search for water but the faucet was dry

My limbs were weak then I started to cry

When I read a letter from my daughter saying goodbye

Where did she and my wife go and when?

As I pondered their whereabouts, I picked up her pen

Snapped out of my sorrow, I recalled a bag I prepared for the end

In the basement, I once joked we’d be ready for the Apocalypse 

No electricity, communication, I never considered this twist 

Packs of food and water secured 

I gathered my thoughts and faced what I most feared

A glimpse in the mirror revealed a full white beard

What was the last thing I could recall?

Orange Leaves blowing in the wind it was early in the fall

Junk mail dated 10 years beyond what I could recall!

The front door was ajar, why I did’t know

A familiar voice nervously cried, hello?

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mlowe5 says:

Deep allegorical messaging. Thanks for sharing this powerful pen! Peace and Love, mlowe5
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The Immortal Wize says:

Man we all could use some sound sleep through the wake of it all, this is some poingent penning.

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2b2b2 says:

Riveting Flow.....well played 'nother one....Write On!! ONE

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks mlowe, The Poet Wize, and 2b2b2!
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mlowe5 says:

Peace and Love, my Brother.

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