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love_supreme
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lightness in the dark
We will make it through this. Believe that.

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Retrospect

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I have not made any forward progress. I kept looking back. 

I was worried about the people that weren't worried about me. I was stuck in zig zag smoking zig zag, swagger gone and just about dam near broke.

I shuffled and did a two step. Only problem is I was two steps back when I was trying to go two steps forward. I was baked, the temperature broke me a long time ago. I was paying attention the wrong things. 

And thats where I got lost.

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The Immortal Wize says:

There's a place called lost in the minds of those who lose themselves to thoughtfulness of the need for others. I know that feeling of being lost it make one invisible, I don't believe there is a wrong or right way to go when your intentions are clear. Enjoyed the word play and sense of direction of this thought probing piece.

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Awesome sauce!

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