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Departure

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Remember the days they ran

Into the woods to be at one with nature.

They NAVIGATED their way

around the old aged wise trees.

They were saturated with awe

As the birds TWEETED in perfect harmony.

The sun flaunted its opulence

As it pierced through the comforting CLOUDS.

The amazement never whittled away.

In that space they toured the

WONDERFUL WIDE WORLD.

Their minds grew as they etched

Their FACES in their BOOKS.

SAM SUNG joyously with

A sway in his footstep

As the smell of the nectareous

APPLE pie beckoned him home.

 

They are now garbed in the pacifying garment.

Lured into NAVIGATING their way around

The engulfing WORLD WIDE WEB.

Swamped with emotions whilst TWEETING all night long.

The hackers flounce their prowess

As they sear through the elusive CLOUD.

Life’s reality is painted as a life that isn’t on FACEBOOK.

Their SAMSUNG is in control of their thoughts,

Other lust for the latest APPLE gear.

 

O seeker of knowledge

O wise one

As invaluable and amazing it may seem

Use it wisely

Use it sparingly

Control it, don’t let it control you.

Otherwise,

it will steal your irreplaceable time.

It will rob you of YOU.

Your quest is to dance to the orchestra of nature

Not to jangle with departure from mother nature.

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The Immortal Wize says:

I love how you intertwined the past
 

lasi_gi says:

Thank you for your appreciation Poet Wize. Peace and love
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2b2b2 says:

Outstanding Work

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lasi_gi says:

Thanks for your support 2b2b2.
 

LP45 says:

Great write lasi_gi. Love the wordplay and imagery in this piece. Thanks for sharing.

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lasi_gi says:

Thanks for your encouraging comments. Much appreciated LP45 God Bless
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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