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Breadcrumbs2021
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FETAL POSITION

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life

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I HAVE BEEN IN A FETAL POSITION

FOR A WHILE

I BURY ME HEAD UNDER THE BLANKET

TO KEEP MY THOUGHTS WARM AND MY

EYES CLOSED

SHEILDING ME FROM THE LIGHT

GAINING NEW INSIGHT INTO ME

EVENTUALLY I HAVE TO STRETCH MY LEGS

THEN AND ONLY THEN DO I REALIZE

THE BLANKET IS TO SMALL TO

CONTAIN ALL OF ME

SO BACK TO A FETAL POSTION I GO

OVERCOME BY SLEEP

AND UNCONSCIOUS

THOUGHT

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Write...well played....thanks for sharing!!
 

love_supreme says:

The flow on this one was phenomenal. Excellent write.

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LP45 says:

Excellent write. Definitely relatable. Thank you for sharing this.

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The Immortal Wize says:

I understand that position very well, love the mediphors.

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