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I stay awake

 Legs dont stop the shake

Heartaches Venting like earth quakes

The heart feels the stake

I stay awake and try to fake

Waiting for day to break

Slamming on my worn out brakes

Learning from all my mistakes

Instead of wisecracks, giving wise takes

Taking the time, for our hearts to heal & wake

Life's a gamble, its all a risk, yet we dare tempt fate

Life's never ending path, travels better with a life mate

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The Immortal Wize says:

Though my life mate is no longer living I do agree, the path can be lonely no matter who's with me.

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mrmelody7 says:

Nicely done like the structure and rhyme scheme very meaning ful and usage of words keep at it
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2b2b2 says:

Excellent Work....well crafted and truthful sentiment....can be truly a treasure to ride out together is so blessed....ONE

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