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Love First and Love Lasts

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Beta Blues....Love

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romance

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Cross-fading her, pulling  strings, plugging emotions

She  harps on  her  pains, once  more, wanting more

Crying  for  a  love  once completely adored, stilled forever

Adorned  in tearful streaks  of  red  lace to trace, memories long gone

Her  face  caked  in  grief,  like make up overly drawn hues

The  wake  up call,  comes from true love born emphatically breeched

She  still  sleeps,  after  falling  so  hard on choices in defeat

Two  babies deposited,  to  brand  her  second hand me down for cheap

She  whispers  superlatives  about  “her”  man, whose never around

Gotten  for  giving  all,  so  sure,  her  all, could end all mis-direction

Night light  left  on  and  one  latch  left  unhinge,  suspense  depends

As her  alarm  clock  gently  plays  r&B quiet  storm  tunes, she  waits…..

The  weight  of  the  apparent  decision,  hard  to  make,  along  a  heart’s break

Settling  in  a  position,  so  as  not  to  lose  a  feeling,  left  only in fleeting memories

Whose  on  first,  causes  a  chuckle  as  Beta  replays  the  mental  riddle,  over  again

Flashbacks  reveals  the  answer  on  that  very  first  intimate  encounter,  third  base

Thinking  she  had  scored  a  home  run,  only  to  find,  it  was  just  another  away  game

Another  wasted  night,  as the  lady  on  pause,  as  her  sobbing  mimics  the  radio blues

Meanwhile,  in  the  adjacent  room  a  young  princess  cries  too,  growing  up 2nd fiddle…..

In  a  poorly  composed  ballad called  

Beta  Blues Love!

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LP45 says:

Wow! Amazing wordplay 2b. So rhythmic I could hear the congas in the background. Thank you for sharing this. Peace and blessings.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Phenomenal scribe 2b2b2

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mlowe5 says:

A delta of a write indeed. I too enjoyed the symphonic wordplay in this messaging write. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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2b2b2 says:

(smile) Thanks LP.....ONE
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks kindly Poet Wize (winks)

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2b2b2 says:

Good to read ya Always mlowe5....thank you for your support and comments....I'm honored sir.....ONE

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