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Breadcrumbs2021
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Under Thinking

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Under Thinking

My eyes are burning from exhaustion
to much sleep or not enough
random passages from plaques
 on the wall
Life is too short for bad coffee
I like my coffee strong
it wakes me up
but not right  now
my eyes are burning from exhaustion
too much sleep or not enough
I have to finish this
random poetry that
doesn’t make sense
running my hand thru my short nappy hair
check my email to see what’s new
more random emails  to delete
a light bulb moment
all my emails are random
nothing is real  only
reminders that payments are due
mostly what I get when checking yahoo
my eyes stopped burning am I’m
beginning to focus
But I don’t want to
find a purpose
I rub my eyes and start to blink
Its too early to start to think
I run my hands thru my nappy head
Forget it
I’m going back to bed.

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2b2b2 says:

Excellent Capture.....Tight....ONE

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mlowe5 says:

Breadcrums, get some rest. When ready, "think over" all those "under thoughts" and get ready for 2021; we Poets/Griots have much ahead to do in our mission-purpose. You are just tired; not weary. Labour of the pregnant poetic mind is like that. We know that you are soon 2b the mother of so many poetic births. We know this from this captured reality where we have been in creative labour: PUSH! Peace and Love, M'Lowe.
 

LP45 says:

Great write Breadcrumbs. This is definitely a relatable piece. Thank you for sharing it.

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