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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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The Upbeat

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when I'm low in spirit
something whispers to me
"get on your feet"

the day has just begun for me

 when I'm low in spirit
something whispers to me
"get on your feet"

 the day is not yet done for me

 when I'm feeling down I need
some sun but the sun don't
 always shine sometimes it's
rainy skies cloudy winds blowing
 even sometimes it's snowing
 
 when I hear "get on your feet"
I'm in good company it's suitable
it works for me to be standing 
 
in awareness where inner voices
softly lisp strongly felt tenderness
for me "I get on my feet"
 
 

 

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LP45 says:

Great write Wize.This is a very motivational piece. Thanks for sharing.

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice!
 

scash102 says:

upbeat and encouraging.. thanks for sharing your craft.

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mlowe5 says:

Yes, indeed! As you know, I'm always lowe but with an upbeat spirit always whispering to me, "...Time to get perpendicular to the ground, m'lo; there's work to be done. As you can feel, I love this inspiring upbeat write. Peace and Love, M'Lowe.

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