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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Something In The Gravy

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you can't pay me nor persuade me to change sides I've been over here all my life I plan to be here when I die I am loyal to cause answered when I heard the call bounce back from a fall war wounds for days hit not grazed those were the days games people play caught in a maze amazing grace how sweet the sound to hear grandma singing in the kitchen whipping up some biscuits my how I miss this everything homemade now it's instant how I miss the taste taking shots trying to chase blues away like a blood on a crip who slipped hope bro get away tired of all the murdering I'm a season veteran done a lot of wartime standing on the front line for a long time been losing my mind need a neurologist CT scan my brain an a anesthesiologist to help me stand the pain work so hard hope it's not in vain out here risking life trying to gain to bring home some grain paint for change cry on canvas everyday can't put the drop cloth away like the pen got too much to say got me too many houses to paint 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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LP45 says:

Nice!!!!
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mlowe5 says:

We are not sopping in vain, Wize! No matter what they say, let us never stop dipping our penning biscuit in the gravy made GrandMa's way. Deep Write; deeper dipping message. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

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