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Day's break

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life

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Dawn's rays pierce the skies

penetrating the shadows of scattered trees

Birds chirp echoes in the soft silence

and hum of neighborhoods waking to rise

Soon the sun climbs

sweat starts to soak

Children laugh in sprinkler mists

under cloud drifts

over daydreamers in the park

The sun crosses the sky

Mother nature starts to close her eyes

in the painted horizon

the moon smiles

as the twilight dies

and yields infinite starlit skies

while closed eyes

slip into endless dreams of the night

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LP45 says:

Great write veelay. Beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing this.
 

veelay@hotmail.com says:

@LP45 so glad you enjoyed feel free to follow me on mytrendingstories.com also some articles on geekinsider.com btw im preliminarly looking to read my work on an online platform (zoom/etc.) if you know of something please . . .-ill read something of yours, expect a comments soon :)

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LP45 says:

You got it veelay. Will do. Thanks for the invite.
 

Sassy says:

Its very beautiful the words and pictures it conjures - thank you

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lasi_gi says:

Thanks for sharing your painting in words.

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