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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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part of you don't want me to suffer
part of you want to see me struggle
you go to sleep one way and you
wake up another you often running
a fever so I have to check your
temperature often so I will know
the side of you I'm dealing with
you're like a riddle that's hard to
figure out a 1000 piece jigsaw
puzzle too many sections to
put together I swear you snap
like the weather some times
you hot sometimes you cold
I be going in circles I love you
but can't trust you one eye
open one closed can't close
them both one day friend
one day foe have to move
quick around you can't be
slow it's hard to know which
way to go one minute you say
"I'm' on my way" the next exit
u'turn and go the other way
my words my bond I mean
what I say you don't recall
what you said yesterday
today only 24 hours to
erase I don't believe a
word you say you can
place your hand on a bible
I still won't have faith in you
it's a spirit in you that
want's me to succeed
it's a demon side of you
trying to sabotage me

 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, the yen and yang of it all. Nice allegorical pen. Peace and Love.
 

Justme says:

Nice 🤙🏽

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