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tiffanyr
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"Elevator"

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Feeling stuck in the basement of hell with hott flames shooting up in fast pace motions with orange light casting shadows on the walls of hell

the entire time I was stuck at the bottom of his pit

I felt the urge to quit the hope to see the light of heaven but the light was to high up with might and gear of humility I knocked the devil out and slide backwards into the safe shelter of the elevator 

seeing the redness of the devil image inching closer with tension built up on it's face I pressed any button I could to close the elevator doors quicker but the doors felt like it was closing slowly 

"Please close the doors" I told myself as I crouched in the corner with legs up to my chest shaking uncontrollably  

finally minutes later doors close completely up one floor I go then lights dim then go dark thinking it was an error I sit and wait

feeling a creepy vibe surround me with my bottom of the soul attitude I accepted 

I had no choice but to pray to Jesus to create an escape

(bowing head) my prayer was " Dear Jesus I realized being on the bottom of the foundation there is no way but up to the higher heights were you reside

my fear will twist to pride to where you lie don't keep me behind " Amen!"

in an instant lights shined speed increased prior riders never noticed the heaven button

Jesus designed that invisible emergency button just for me his child of God his glory

devil placed turbulence once more trying to stop God movement

God is not one to mess with 

God fought on my behalf and didn't miss

I can't wait to give God a kiss on the cheek because of how good he been to me 

heaven button lit up 

instead of stepping on carpet I step onto a cloud welcome to heaven I'm home

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The Immortal Wize says:

Love it!

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incouragedpoet says:

YESSSSS! I love the visuals!!

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