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Midnight Coal Trains

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Softly rumbling in the dark distant moonlit woods

The midnight coal train

Moans Coltrane 

Slowly growing closer

Louder second by second

Groaning moans trembling

Vibrations)) shaking

the earth like

A thousand buffaloes

And an army of ghost riders

And headless horsemen

Descending from the sky

The steady ground shakes

Bearing the fearful earthquake

Path ahead

The ancient calvaries’ destination

Lies in the eyes and minds

Of bulls on parade seeing red

 

The nucleolus of mounting vibrations

And sounds emerging from

The distant gentle hum

Reaches a rhythmic violent climax

As the steam engine blasts

Resounding while

Motherloads of freight cargo

And the occasional random hobo

Breeze by in the wind

And follow

Steam engine number 99 leading

The very last car passing on by towards home

Toward the hopeful morning destination

In the bright and tranquil sunrise

of the lonely railyard waiting alone

in the growing silence of mourning

faded memories of chaotic yester-nights

slowly wither away with the wind flow

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LP45 says:

Great imagery veelay. This reminds me of my childhood when we used to race up to the train tracks on our bikes just to count the cars to see how many there were. We could hear the horn long before we got up to the tracks. Thanks for sharing this memory for me.

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, beautiful imagery. Took me way back to many moons ago when I sat listening to Coltrane, doing school homework while waiting for Uncle Dennis coming from his job at the roundhouse just two blocks from our house. Thanks for the share . Peace and Love, mlowe5

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Kilomsundrstd says:

Love how you put it all together.. it just flowed.. nice write

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