a window is not glass a window is not a pane a window is not a door to walk through a window is a opening
a window is a slot a window is a outlook a window is a gap a window
is a vent a window is a portal a window is a picture in a frame a window is a way out a window is a entrance a window is transparent round oval are square a window is a ecential hole in the wall
The Immortal Wize
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mlowe5 says: Indeed! Let us not be as moths! Peace and Love, mlowe5. |
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mlowe5 says: Great Write, Wize. The visionary pain of the pane. An afterthought as I sit here gazing out; my eyes "jumping off!" Peace and Love. |
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Kilomsundrstd says: A portal to many things.. all in the eyes of the beholder.. nice write |
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LP45 says: This is the most artistic description of a window that I've ever read. This is dope. Thanks for the share. Peace! |
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