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THE MOONLIGHT, THE OWL AND THE RAIN...

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                     Apropos A Psalm of Awareness:

                    To be sorry is to tarry in darkness;

                    To be aware is to be enlightened.

 

Beneath the celestial canopy,

Emerald hedging cast moonlight

Shadows on the Edenic-like scene;

And scattered clouds crawled casually

Across The sparkling blue sky;

 

An old wise owl—hooting—cracked

The curtain of silence as a dying star

Fading—in big bang outing—shot across

The cosmos! And suddenly, the thunder

Loudly roared and the lightning struck;

 

Frightened rain stampeded the nocturnal

Plain—weary worn—darkness sought repose.

Lazily, the golden sun yawned, peeked out

And gracefully rose.

 

The elders say that when the owl hoots—on

Moonlight nights—somebody is going to die

And that the rain is the tears of their goodness.

 

Today, injustice has become the scene’s theme;

The moon’s gone, and the owl, a silent sentinel

And the reserved rain refuses to shed her tears.

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Colette says:

Very in depth. What I took from this powerful piece is Injustice has become silent, "the norm" in today's society. Everything has gone quiet. Superior message!
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mlowe5 says:

ONE! Right on, Colette. Peace and Love, M'Lowe
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The Immortal Wize says:

It's always a joy to read your creative work.

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mlowe5 says:

Many thanks, Poet Wize. Likewise! Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, love_supreme. Many thanks; much appreciated. Peace and Love.

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