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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Ultimate Betrayal

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if you ever been snaked stabbed in the back betrayed or backdoored that is what activates you into activism the act of some one else's betrayal will cause you to spring into action it's when the scars of a broken heart starts to itch old wounds rise above the skin like large hideous keloids suddenly you feel like you been deployed mad enough to kill it's like the only act one can't forgive war is on looking for the the one who zoned time to write a wrong penetrating underneath the skin seeping in like it's happening again it didn't go away it never ends side eye a friend hands out your pocket show those hands no one gets a second change to do it again they might be successful the next time around secure the circle it's hard to believe it would be you who make me bleed beg and plead for life to someone I would've laid down my own for my own sister my own brother even my own mother get no certainty from me that's how it got to be couldn't count the tubes in me no visitors got too many enemies fed intravenously unbeknown to me flat lined for twelve minutes doctor signed a death certificate lived to tell it all head swollen like a bowling ball heart goes out to those who take that fall back to the basis have to learn to walk makes my blood boil it makes my skin crawl it takes a special kinda being to emdody that type of loyalty

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, Sir. I can not bring back my 2 youngest ones in body but their souls and spirit never left me and pray the same loyalty will be of me! Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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