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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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things gratulally change as we graduate things before depreciates over a period of time it effortlessly flows forward never back piles up up up until the stack falls on us all it's all automatic push button stop and start how can it possibly be conceived to continue without things considered to be old because they are too nostalgic the symbol of power is a circle in motion acted upon by an outside force penetrated by a breach if the power goes out will we be rendered powerless over occurrences we have no power to change experience takes us through changes depending on how many changes we been through it will be the catalyst that will get us through but what about those held back in school what are they going to do when technology fails to prevail or improve saw the sign in the state of Texas when the lights went out late bloomers didn't know what to do when they no longer could go online pushing buttons as if suddenly it will work but it didn't the power was off plenty of time for conversation but no one talked no one knew how to break the ice this is what this new worlds like these are the beings being raised in cyberspace laughing at Noah building a ark it's quite a clear view in the dark

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mlowe5 says:

No matter the present and its testing, divine wisdom and guidance comes from old experiences; not from futuristic cyberspace-like surprises. Great write with appropriate title. Thanks for the share, Poet Wise. Peace and Love, M. Lowe.

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LP45 says:

Excellent write Wize. I agree with ya 100%. Thanks for sharing.

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Colette says:

Definitely this young generation are clueless about survival mode and how to function without cell phones, computers and all this modern day technology. AWESOME and AMAZING write!!!

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