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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Can I pick you up at 8?

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first love

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When we first met you’d just turned 20

Then you spoke and the weather changed from rain to partly sunny

The wind blew your hair to the side

And I caught a glimpse of the future in your eyes

On a boat for a Marine Biology class, I asked where you were from, you said Queens

A Sam Cooke song popped in my head, sung by Prince Akeem!

Senior year of college, we studied and dated in between 

Both getting A’s and B’s in our Biology classes, that semester was like a dream!

I wished that we’d met sooner, but here’s the funny thing

Fate made us wait, I had a different major as a Freshman and you were just 16!

I’d seen you around campus but we both had different scenes

I recall saying hello in passing as we’d both come and go

After few weeks of studying together, I asked if you’d like to see a show

You said yes, then went up to your dorm to change for our first date

I said the movie starts at ten, but first we’ll get some din, can I pick you up at 8?

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LP45 says:

Very nice nosajm.
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mlowe5 says:

Smooth! And still together! Beautiful. Enjoyed the read. Took me back to 60's keloid memories. Thanks for the share, Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

Flora$$$ghostw12 says:

Excellent confessional poeyry

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks LP45, mlowe5, and Flora$$$ghostw12!
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mlowe5 says:

ONE! Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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