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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I told you from the start
I can't give you my heart
I'm not a donor I own this
beat I got my mastery
I no longer have the time
nor energy you for some
one to fall in and out of
love with me it's sheer
insanity you're beautiful
to me but I can't get
hooked on your vanity
it's too much fish in
the community truth
is I rather hunt than fish
it's something about
going in for the kill
that gives me a thrill
I want something real
if it don't exist I guess
I'll never feel it's all
overrated I mean
"what's the big deal"

 

 

 

 

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LP45 says:

When ya gotta tell it like it is, ya tell it like it is. Great write Wize. Dig the flow of this piece. Thanks for sharing.

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King Suspire says:

Real talk!

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love_supreme says:

Very nice!

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mlowe5 says:

Well pointed in every sense! Indeed, when fishing you never know what your hook is going to get you hooked on. But when you're hunting, you at least get to check out the "prey" before she becomes that treasure you desired. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Chris says:

Your appeal must be real. I feel you. Nice

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