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inpsirational 1 min read 466 views May 1, 2021

Say Yes

 

 

Life awakens at 20 years old                                                                  Yet, begins at 40 years old

I'm here to testify before a judge and jury                                                  
In my mind, I've been running a race unseen trying to figure out what's what       
It took me awhile, but I'm here to say life grabs you by the hand and leads you wherever your heart aches desires   

What is most important people don't see   
They often get caught up i frivilous things and out are fearing what is really called life
Glize and glamour overshadows the picture frame   
Leaving one to think it's diamonds and apparel that makes you 


So feast your eyes  on this
It's a hit or miss    
The one who sets high and looks low is it 
so say yes to him and him only    
for through him we all exist

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Chris

Nicely Written

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40 Gifted_and_Classy

Thanks Chris!

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wordsMAKEus

Thank you for reading. See more stuff at Renayspace.com. Happy writing.

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40 Gifted_and_Classy

You are welcome wordsMakeus! Your welcome for the read! Feel free to check out my work as well! I’m looking for constructive criticism!

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I like this poem.

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