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Blind Side

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life

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just wrote a poem called blind sided

and when it was almost complete

my finger somehow

accidentally pressed delete

im pretty pissed off

so i had to write again

its just annoying because i feel

that it could have helped a friend

happens so fast

i couldnt talk about the

i feel that is a lot of peoples problem

because the doesnt quit

life is cold

while death is colder

while life gets old

and death gets over

exaggerated

we still never see it coming

exacerbated

by our own self numbing

keep your eyes on the prize

when you go for the ride

and remember

to check your mirrors

there's always a blind side

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The Immortal Wize says:

I can relate to accidentally deleting writing I felt that feeling many times but don't sweat it because this one right here surly will help a friend. It's good to see your pen flowing again.
 

King Suspire says:

Accidents happen, then we move on. Stay strong!

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