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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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On the highway speeding...

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On the highway, speeding

Down the left lane, preceding 

A semi truck on my bumper, we

Can’t go any faster, because of the cops ahead, see?

I gestured and nodded, but he must not believe me

He honked his horn and continued to rush and complain

I finally signaled to get over into the slow lane

After the truck passed, suddenly one of its tires ripped

A loud boom and white smoke began to emit

As the impatient trucker swerved then hit

The guard rail, he tipped into the pit

And Jackknifed, sliding in a collision course 

Toward the parked police force

Not guilty, but I was left with a tinge of remorse

I set my hazards to flash, as I pulled over on the side of the road

I began to sense what my gut soon forebode

The accident progressed in cinematic slow motion

A chain of events culminated in a tragic commotion 

When I finally processed what I’d seen

I realized that the truck was hauling gasoline!

I dialed 911, and prayed like I was in church

As I popped the clutch and threw my 6 speed in reverse

First I saw flames, then felt an incredible heat before the explosion 

Drive forward or backward, what would you have chosen?

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LP45 says:

Excellent write Nosajm.Was this an actual event? Don't know what I would've done except run and pray. Thanks for sharing this.

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks LP45! No, it’s complete fiction - I just spend a lot of time driving on the highway - LOL!

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mlowe5 says:

Great write Nosajm! There's some heavy allegorical messaging in this profound imaging write! Powerful! Divine wisdom and guidance will always come from God. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

Outstanding write brother!

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