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IntrovertedPoet
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Sorrow

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romance

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Brush my tongue

across

cracked lips

see if I

can savor you

but

all I taste

is pain

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Chris says:

Use moisture on the crackI lips at night with cocoa butter chapstick. Rub acros the crack gently with baby wipes. When the crack heals, the lips would taste a flavor instead of agony. May God bless you with tomorrow. Continue with your poems. Your writing has image
 

Chris says:

Use moisture on the crackI lips at night with cocoa butter chapstick. Rub across the crack gently with baby wipes. When the crack heals, the lips would taste a flavor instead of agony. May God bless you with tomorrow. Continue with your poems. Your writing has image
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2b2b2 says:

Great Spin...Bravo...thanks for sharing
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Charles2 says:

Powerful message... raw, subtle. Hits offset ...and indirect

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