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Undertow

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life

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As 

 

strong currents, 

 

churn and roil 

 

the ocean extending 

a long arc ...through 

massive waves

 

to ride hard, 

driving forces unseen

 

carry 

insanely malevolent 

 

impulses...

 

turning energies 

to a point of focus

 

...hurled madly,

 

yawed 

in cyclonic 

fusion

 

directed towards 

the nether...

 

falling swiftly 

...into a time warp

 

as 

the matrix 

of the incoming

 event horizon... 

 

opening

dimensions beyond

 

into a black hole... 

 

sparking visions 

 

timelessly warped 

  beyond recognition

 

a void in motion,

violent, angry, 

 

powerfully

swept... deep

 

carried under

until 

the life will 

 

to struggle, 

 

lives

...no more...

 

helpless, 

 

all urge to breathe 

leaves the body... 

 

the soul, slips

beyond retreat 

 

...into surrender

 

moments later...

 unconscious

 

heartbeat, 

gone 

 

...lost

in defeat

 

no longer to 

rise 

 

...against 

...the tide... 

 

no longer flowing  

against the worldly, call 

 

 

...drowned... 

 

 

C2   

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2b2b2 says:

Deep Cinematic Capture.....thanks for sharing.....ONE
 

LP45 says:

Great write C2. Great imagery and flow. Thanks for sharing this.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Thanks for the fantastic voyage C2.

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mlowe5 says:

A powerful, imaging allegorical message of needed awareness to be about our ensuring our abilities to remain buoyant in the struggle! Another great pen, C2. Peace and Love.
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Charles2 says:

Thank you all, for giving the wheels a spin... Always a pleasure for you to drop in...

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