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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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ever wonder why you're

left here to cry, I do all

the time every time

some one I love has gone

on to bluer skies and

greener pastures I feel

more than lonely and

for the life of me I can't

explain the pain other

than it hurts in a place

I can't reach to comfort

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mlowe5 says:

I feel you, my Brother. Now, in my soon to become octogenarian years, I come to comforting awareness that love eventually heals its own pain! ONE. Peace and Love.

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Ninah318 says:

I recently lost someone very close to me and this captures what it feels like - the last 4 lines says it all. Felt it.

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