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King Suspire
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Lungz 2 Gillz

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   Life ends and extends like oceanic flows.

Building tidal waves, with currents that pull.

   Into the abyss, the depths of Nautilus.

Those unable to adjust to the aquatic.

   A new world as if Atlantis.

Oxygenated air no longer the basis.

   Lungs to gills, evolution to exist.

In societies hydrostatic pressured environment.

   As arms and legs transform into pectoral, and caudal fins.

The extinction of the walk, replaced by oscillation.

   To wiggle through their teared saturation.

The radication of being complacent.

   Weighed down if your thoughts don't float with culture cancelation.

   No device to keep afloat those struggling to make it.

Unable to swim, they shall drown.

   And sink into the mouth of the kraken.

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mlowe5 says:

Great capture, King Suspire. Sound allegorical, metaphorical wordplay. May we evolve skills to enable us to stay afloat and swim on to liberation, avoiding the giant mouth of the kraken seeking to devour us in the ocean of life. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love..
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Charles2 says:

Remarkably, imaginative
 

King Suspire says:

Thanks Charles2, appreciate the time you took to read and comment.

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