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Breadcrumbs2021
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RAIN CHANCES

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life

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RAIN CHANCES

IF I WAS THE RAIN
THAT SEEPED THROUGH MY VEINS
IT WOULD TAKE A MINUTE TO
POUR OUT THE PAIN
I HOLD BACK THE TEARS
I HAVE NOTHING TO GAIN
IT’S COLD AND WET
IT LOOKS LIKE RAIN

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mlowe5 says:

A nice rhythmic rhyming metaphoric flow with a deep message. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.
 

Breadcrumbs2021 says:

Appreciate the comment thanks.

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